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Altered States in Poetic Dreams – poem by Bruce Whealton

Altered States in Poetic Dreams

There is one
difference
in my use
of hypnotic
patterning
in poetry…

I do not write
a poem
with one reader
or listener
in mind.

I write
those things
that have
altered
my consciousness
in the most
intense
ways.

So, the question
is not
can you be
hypnotized,
the question is
can I find
the language
patterns
that will
be most effective
in altering
your
consciousness.

By Bruce Whealton
June 24, 2009

Honest Confessions – Poetry by Bruce Whealton

Here’s a revised poem, that I wrote a few years back, called “Honest Confessions.” I end this latest revision with the lines, “I am a poem/ revised too many times.
Honest Confessions

I’ve been explaining myself
over and over and again,
to you, my sister,
my brother -

My reader -
confessing some of my deepest secrets.

I left a nice home…
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