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Ghosts and the Haunted House in the Woods - Poem by Bruce Whealton PDF Print E-mail
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Written by Bruce Whealton   
Monday, 02 March 2009 05:22
Your feedback and suggestions for this poem are very much appreciated.  It is an early draft and I hope to see what I can do with this.  Comments are welcomed and appreciated.  From your feedback and suggestions, hopefully my skills as a poet will grow.

 

Ghosts and the Haunted House in the Woods

 

There was a haunted house
not far from where I grew up -
about a mile of woods
separated me from that place.
It was set into the woods,
set off from a rather quiet road
and this hideaway location
only added to the intrigue.

My friends or my sister and I
would walk through the woods
at dusk, and watch
eerie lights come on
at dusk
in the house - 
a house where nobody lived -
we were quite certain of that.

You could see the entire inside
by looking in through the windows.
It appeared empty,

except for that something
that we thought we were seeing,
or the voices we thought we were hearing,
at dusk or after dark.

Bruce Whealton 2009

Last Updated on Monday, 02 March 2009 05:27